Am I A Bad Creative Writer Please Tell Me?

Well, you use a awful amount of &`s and your spelling stinks, you must be a man? But all is not lost, your story like is good, and these kind of story's sell in books and movies, try not to stop a sentence or start one with AND or & and this would look a lot better, Hey hang in there don`t give up, All books started with a idea in someones mind, and they just put it down on paper. Good luck